I can hear them so loud.. Simple and beautiful;
cool word flow.
The picture is pretty soothing!
The sun shining brightly down on my head as I sit on a large stone or bolder with my feet in the water; moving them lazily while I sing a harmony to the waters melody.That's the picture your poem put in my head. Very well done and thanks so much for sharing!http://elizena-lovingmycreator.blogspot.com/2012/10/momma-is-there-man-on-moon.html